We are aware that you are aware of the problems but there has not been any
action taken from the congress or president to help us. Above are few
suggestions from us, and we request you consider directing congress to act
on them as soon as possible so that we can contribute even better to the
growth and prosperity of this country.
两个"are aware of"连在一起很怪。"Above are few suggestions"是语法错吧?
改为:
We strongly hope the current legislation and administration could take
these
actions to help us. We strongly hope the action could be taken as soon as
possible. We are confident the outcome of these actions would be win-win:
we
realize our dreams and the United States get the economy boosted again.