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t********5 发帖数: 8005 | 1 我让以前工作的公司的老板帮着写推荐信,上面有一点点technical information。他
觉得有技术信息外泄的concern (我觉得他是over concern了)。但是公司的人对这些
东西都很看重和敏感,也没办法。于是他修改了我的推荐信,把我contribution的细节
都去掉了,换成了这样的语句“
Dr. A’s work at company B filled the technical gap by proposing a new
Misfire Monitor strategy. Due to company B's proprietary interests, this
strategy cannot be described in any detail here. Suffice it to say that Dr.
A’s work enabled company B to meet the 2007 OBD-II regulations.Vehicle test
results show that the new Misfire Monitor strategy is compatible with state
-of-the-art fuel injection pulse structure, and it can accurately detect
misfiring cylinders. The Misfire Monitor strategy developed by Dr. A has
been implemented in our production diesel control software. His innovative
work on the Misfire Monitor made important contributions to the advanced
diagnostic strategy development for Company B's high pressure common rail
fuel systems.
尤其是其中这句: ”Due to company B's proprietary interests, this strategy
cannot be described in any detail here.“。这样的话出现在绿卡申请的推荐信里
面可以吗?
请前辈们指点。 | l******5 发帖数: 3030 | 2 好象没什么不可以, 只要别删掉一些个关键词就行。 |
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