n******8
发帖数: 558 | 1 Parallel
Love drew two parallel lines.
One for you,
And one for me.
Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
Fate drew two parallel curves.
One for you,
And one for me.
Lines or curves,
Neither my love deserves. |
B****n
发帖数: 11290 | 2 真實的世界是兩人平行的都向北走 一定在北極交會
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Parallel
: Love drew two parallel lines.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
: Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
: Fate drew two parallel curves.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Lines or curves,
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 3 写地真好，不过最后两句是啥意思啊
：Parallel
：Love drew two parallel lines.
：One for you,
：And one for me.
：Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
：Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
：Fate drew two parallel curves.
：One for you,
：And one for me.
：Lines or curves,
：..........
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Parallel
: Love drew two parallel lines.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
: Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
: Fate drew two parallel curves.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Lines or curves,
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B**********y
发帖数: 3855 | 4 楼主“得不着”的尴尬病，
成为源源不绝的创造动力。：）
还是张爱玲看得透男人，
不过是珠砂痣和白月光的问题。 |
s*l
发帖数: 9421 | 5 我比她看得透多了。
【在 B**********y 的大作中提到】
: 楼主“得不着”的尴尬病，
: 成为源源不绝的创造动力。：）
: 还是张爱玲看得透男人，
: 不过是珠砂痣和白月光的问题。
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s*l
发帖数: 9421 | 6 不错，洋文有洋文的味道。
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Parallel
: Love drew two parallel lines.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
: Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
: Fate drew two parallel curves.
: One for you,
: And one for me.
: Lines or curves,
|
n******8
发帖数: 558 | 7 谢谢糖枫美言！ 就是想说啥也没得到， 霉运， 凭什么。
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 写地真好，不过最后两句是啥意思啊
:
: ：Parallel
: ：Love drew two parallel lines.
: ：One for you,
: ：And one for me.
: ：Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
: ：Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
: ：Fate drew two parallel curves.
: ：One for you,
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n******8
发帖数: 558 | 8 刚刚shaq说了， the earth is flat. 我信了。
【在 B****n 的大作中提到】
: 真實的世界是兩人平行的都向北走 一定在北極交會
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n******8
发帖数: 558 | 9 珠砂痣和白月光是啥典故？ 张爱玲的只看过电影， 还是色戒。
【在 B**********y 的大作中提到】
: 楼主“得不着”的尴尬病，
: 成为源源不绝的创造动力。：）
: 还是张爱玲看得透男人，
: 不过是珠砂痣和白月光的问题。
|
n******8
发帖数: 558 | 10 谢谢 skl 兄， 点赞你的老婆示范， 不知为啥没显示。
【在 s*l 的大作中提到】
: 不错，洋文有洋文的味道。
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 11 不过你最后一句的意思好像是说你不配得到，所以我很疑惑啊。。。。。因为你想表达
的应该不会是你不配，肯定是别人不配或者是命运不配捉弄你之类的。
：写地真好，不过最后两句是啥意思啊
：谢谢糖枫美言！ 就是想说啥也没得到， 霉运， 凭什么。
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 写地真好，不过最后两句是啥意思啊
:
: ：Parallel
: ：Love drew two parallel lines.
: ：One for you,
: ：And one for me.
: ：Your beauty slanted mine towards yours.
: ：Yet fate bent yours away from mine.
: ：Fate drew two parallel curves.
: ：One for you,
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 12 这个我相信，张爱玲爱胡兰成这种人都卑微到尘土里开花去了，能有啥好眼力劲儿啊。
。。。
：我比她看得透多了。
【在 s*l 的大作中提到】
: 不错，洋文有洋文的味道。
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 13 张爱玲虽然自己的生活貌似过得一塌糊涂，不过小说写得真是好啊，文笔好到几十年难
出一个吧。。。。。
：珠砂痣和白月光是啥典故？ 张爱玲的只看过电影， 还是色戒。
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 谢谢 skl 兄， 点赞你的老婆示范， 不知为啥没显示。
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s*l
发帖数: 9421 | 14 don't worry。我们似乎很心意相通，这个我在N年前也写过一首有关数学的小打油。
http://www.mitbbs.com/mwap/forum/article.php?board=LeisureTime&groupid=1815047&content_type=all
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 谢谢 skl 兄， 点赞你的老婆示范， 不知为啥没显示。
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n******8
发帖数: 558 | |
n******8
发帖数: 558 | 16 deserve is neutral i meant deserve something better
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 不过你最后一句的意思好像是说你不配得到，所以我很疑惑啊。。。。。因为你想表达
: 的应该不会是你不配，肯定是别人不配或者是命运不配捉弄你之类的。
:
: ：写地真好，不过最后两句是啥意思啊
: ：谢谢糖枫美言！ 就是想说啥也没得到， 霉运， 凭什么。
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 17 哦，我是没搞清主语，最后一句是用了倒装吗，还原一下，neither lines nor curves
deserve my love.....是这样吗？
：deserve is neutral i meant deserve something better
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: deserve is neutral i meant deserve something better
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n******8
发帖数: 558 | 18 因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its subject is
my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your interpretation, that
is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse interpretation, very
peronal.
curves
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 哦，我是没搞清主语，最后一句是用了倒装吗，还原一下，neither lines nor curves
: deserve my love.....是这样吗？
:
: ：deserve is neutral i meant deserve something better
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 19 我其实就是含蓄地提出最后一句话是不是要用倒装句才合乎语法规范？不过写诗嘛，诗
人应该不受语法束缚的，而且我的英语是体育老师教的。。。。。
：因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
：something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
：parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its
subject is my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your
interpretation, that is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse
interpretation, very
：peronal.
：
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
: something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
: parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its subject is
: my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your interpretation, that
: is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse interpretation, very
: peronal.
:
: curves
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t******g
发帖数: 615 | 20 你的学生和博后知道您在这写诗么？？？
：因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
：something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
：parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its
subject is my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your
interpretation, that is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse
interpretation, very
：peronal.
：
【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
: something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
: parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its subject is
: my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your interpretation, that
: is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse interpretation, very
: peronal.
:
: curves
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n******8
发帖数: 558 | 21 不知道， 知道也不会跟我说。
【在 t******g 的大作中提到】
: 你的学生和博后知道您在这写诗么？？？
:
: ：因为我觉得 parallel is bad, so one meaning is my love for you deserves
: ：something better, such as an intersection during the course, instead of
: ：parallel to the end. you notice i use "deserves" as a verb so its
: subject is my love, objects are lines or curves. but i like your
: interpretation, that is poem, so little words, yet very open and diverse
: interpretation, very
: ：peronal.
: ：
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